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I want to show you,
For you to see,
Whatever you need,
That’s what I’ll be,

I’ll give you forever,
I won’t leave your side,
Just lean on me now,
There’s nothing to hide,

Just trust me, I know,
Its harder than said,
’Thousand problems arise,
Your heart sinks like lead,

But know that I’m here,
You’re worth that and more,
Just waiting for you,
Deep down to my core,

You know how I care,
The love that I give,
Just to be near you,
For you I do live.
©2008-2009 ~wannabe-emokid
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Author's Comments

Wrote this a while ago (as you can tell by how bad it is) :P

But you know...

The message hasn't changed one bit, I still mean every word of it... you know that my Love, right?

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:iconbroken101:
I really like this one. Sounds like what I'm feeling and going through. I dont think it's bad though, I think it's good. As long as a poem is written from the heart, mind, or with emotions it's good.^^

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Love doesn't walk away...
people do...
I want to show the world how beautiful I can be...
But the world never sees me...

R.I.P. Art Lane...you are missed dearly </3
:iconwannabe-emokid:
true, i guess. i agree, but its like whenever im the one writing it that rule doesn't apply lol

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One small mistake and your whole world changes to what could have been... relive that moment until the pain is gone, but remember, the battle is only just begun...
:iconbroken101:
I understand ya there. I think my poems are shit even though people tell me they're good. just cant see the good in them, only see the good in others not my own.

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Love doesn't walk away...
people do...
I want to show the world how beautiful I can be...
But the world never sees me...

R.I.P. Art Lane...you are missed dearly </3
:iconwannabe-emokid:
i guess its just the mark of writers or somehting, cause all my friends who write go through the same thing lol

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One small mistake and your whole world changes to what could have been... relive that moment until the pain is gone, but remember, the battle is only just begun...
:iconbroken101:
lol yup guess that's just the way it is^^

--
Love doesn't walk away...
people do...
I want to show the world how beautiful I can be...
But the world never sees me...

R.I.P. Art Lane...you are missed dearly </3
:iconluv-su-gar-13:
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